Third Quarter Submission

This is my revised version of my magazine spread.

For my table of contents, I chose to revise it by adding a light colored text box behind the page numbers and titles to make them easier to read. It helped make the text stand out more prominently against the photo background.

For this first article page, I worked to improve this by condensing the text and choosing the most important parts of the interview rather than every part of the answer. Additionally, I made sure to add the website, issue date, and page number at the bottom of the page.

For the second article page, I also condensed the text on the page to make it slightly less cramped and easier to read. Similarly to the first article page, I had to add the website, issue date, and page to make the magazine look more realistic. I believe these small things I tweaked helped make the magazine look like a true fashion magazine and more appealing to the reader.